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If I asked you to tell me what happens in your story, you could probably do it.
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You know the opening, you know how it starts, you know the big plot turns, you may know how it ends, you might even have it outlined chapter by chapter.
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Now, let me ask you a different question.
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Who is your character at the end of your story that she wasn't at the beginning?
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What can she see, face, or do that she couldn't before?
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If that's harder to answer, it may be because you've spent more time figuring out what happens to your character than what it changes for her.
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And that's often where a story that is plenty happening still doesn't feel like it holds together.
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In last week's episode, we talked about how one clear event gives your first chapter its shape.
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So today I want to zoom out to the whole story and to the person at the center of it.
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Think of your story as two lines.
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There's the plot line, the external events, everything that happens.
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That's the horizontal line.
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Then there's the vertical line running through all those plot events.
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That's your character's inner story, how she understands what's happening, how she responds to it, what she believes about herself and other people, and what she isn't ready to face yet.
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It's the emotional structure.
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Those two lines are bound together like brick and mortar.
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The external events are the bricks.
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Your character's inner story is the mortar that holds them together.
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Without the mortar, you've got a pile of bricks.
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Without the bricks, the mortar has nothing to hold.
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But here's the part I want to focus on today.
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Your plot serves your character, not the other way around.
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And many writers focus more on what happens than who it happens to.
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They create all these dramatic events in the plot, and the characters are just reacting, and they're often reacting in predictable ways.
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No surprises there.
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Now, that doesn't mean you have to figure out your character's entire character arc before you start writing.
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You might discover it through the scenes you write.
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You might get halfway through a draft before you begin to understand what this story is asking your character to face.
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But whether you're drafting or revising, the question is the same.
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What do these plot events mean for the person living through them?
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And how do her responses, her choices, shape what happens next?
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How do her choices affect other characters?
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How do their responses change the trajectory of the plot?
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Okay, so let's get into it.
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Here's a question I want you to think about as you write.
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What hangs in the balance for your character?
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There may be something very concrete she could gain or lose: a job, a marriage, her home, her safety, or something less tangible, like her identity.
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But what does that mean to her?
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Losing the job might mean losing the one place where she feels competent.
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A marriage ending might force her to question a version of herself she's held on to for years.
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Falling in love could mean getting hurt again.
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That's where an event begins to matter beyond the fact that it happened.
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Two characters could experience the same event and respond in completely different ways, because different things hang in the balance for each of them.
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One character hears criticism from her mother and thinks, I need to try harder.
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Another thinks, I knew I couldn't trust you.
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And those interpretations lead to different choices.
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So when you're deciding what happens next, don't stop at whether the plot event is interesting.
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Ask what it puts at risk for this particular character.
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What does it challenge?
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What does it make harder for her to avoid?
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When you know that, even a quiet scene can carry enormous tension.
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Change is movement, not a mood.
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A character's inner story isn't just a record of how she feels.
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She can be lonely in chapter one, lonelier in chapter 10, and devastated in chapter 20.
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You've intensified the feeling, but has her understanding changed?
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Has she made a choice that creates a new problem?
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Has she tried something she wouldn't have tried before?
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Has she risked something?
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That's the movement we're looking for.
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If your character starts out lonely and wants to do something to solve that problem, what decision does she make despite being scared?
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What risks does she take?
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And what complications come out of those risks to challenge her?
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She might still be alone at the end of the story, but perhaps she's not lonely anymore.
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What being alone means to her has changed.
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And change doesn't have to mean becoming happier or wiser.
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A character can become more guarded.
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She can recognize something and refuse to act on it.
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She can make a choice that costs her more than she expected.
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What matters is the experiences of the story have consequences inside her, and those consequences affect what she does.
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For example, in Gail Honeyman's Eleanor Oliphant is completely fine.
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When we meet Eleanor, her life runs on routine.
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Work, the same meals, vodka on the weekends, Wednesday phone calls with her mother.
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She keeps other people at a distance, and she will tell you she's completely fine.
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But as readers, we begin to see the loneliness she herself doesn't acknowledge.
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So we have the circumstances of her life, and we have the way she understands those circumstances.
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Those aren't quite the same thing.
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Then Eleanor decides she's fallen in love with a musician she's never met.
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She builds a fantasy around him and begins preparing for their future together.
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New clothes, new hair, a plan for becoming the woman she thinks he'll want.
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There's movement there.
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She wants connection.
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But look at the form that connection takes.
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She's imagining a relationship with someone she doesn't know.
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She can give him all the qualities she needs him to have without the uncertainty of getting close to a real person.
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Meanwhile, she and Raymond, a colleague from work, come across an older man who has collapsed on the street.
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They help him, and helping Sammy brings Eleanor into contact with his family, their warmth, their invitations.
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Now she's encountering something she can't control through fantasy.
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Real people who include her, who notice her, who might come to matter to her.
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And that creates its own discomfort.
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Wanting connection doesn't mean she knows how to accept it.
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Then her fantasy about the musician collapses.
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When she sees him perform, the man in front of her doesn't match the man she's invented.
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That disappointment is devastating because of what she's invested in it.
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This was supposed to be her way into a different life.
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And when Eleanor reaches her lowest point, Raymond shows up.
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She begins accepting help.
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She starts counseling.
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Slowly, she begins facing the past and questioning things she's treated as true.
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By the end, her life isn't neatly resolved, but her relationship to other people and to her own experience has changed.
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She's beginning to let herself be known.
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Now here's how the plot serves Eleanor.
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Look at how these events work.
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The musician gives Eleanor somewhere to place her longing without having to navigate an actual relationship.
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Helping Sammy brings her into contact with people she can't simply invent.
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The collapse of her fantasy exposes how much she's been depending on it.
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And Raymond's presence gives her an opportunity to accept the kind of help she spent so much of her life resisting.
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Each plot event puts pressure on something inside her.
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But Eleanor also shapes the plot.
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She pursues the musician, she participates in helping Sammy, she responds to invitations, she accepts help.
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What happens affects her.
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What she does in response affects what happens next.
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That's how the two lines move together.
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If we knew nothing about Eleanor's loneliness or the hopes she's placed in the musician, his disappointing performance wouldn't be that impactful.
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It would just be another thing happening.
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It matters because we understand what it means to her.
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Choices are where change becomes visible.
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This is how readers experience a character's change.
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We can learn a great deal through her thoughts, through what she remembers, notices, judges, or realizes.
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But we also need to see what she does with that understanding.
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Does she answer the phone this time, tell someone the truth, stay when she would usually leave, ask for help, then wish she hadn't?
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Those choices don't have to be dramatic to be significant.
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And they won't necessarily move in one direction.
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Your character can take a risk, feel exposed, and retreat.
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She can recognize an old pattern and repeat it anyway.
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That doesn't erase the movement, it gives you something to work with.
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Now she knows something she didn't know before.
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What will it take for her to act on it?
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Sometimes your character doesn't change.
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The frustrating truth is that sometimes people can't change, sometimes they won't, sometimes they refuse to change.
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For example, Frank Wheeler in Revolutionary Road is scared to change.
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He holds on to the life he's claimed he wants to escape, and the outcome is tragic.
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His refusal has consequences, and by the end, we understand something about him that we couldn't see at the beginning.
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So when you sit down to write and you're not sure what comes next, return to your character.
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In last week's episode, I asked you to think about what your character wants when we first meet her.
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Now follow that want through the whole story.
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What does she want right now?
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What is she trying to protect?
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What isn't she ready to face?
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Then consider an event that puts pressure on one of those things.
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It might force her to choose between what she wants and what feels safe.
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It might give her exactly what she's been pursuing, only to reveal that it doesn't solve the problem she thought it would.
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Or it might offer her something she needs but isn't ready to accept.
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And once that plot event happens, stay with her response.
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What does she think it means?
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What fear or resistance does it kick up?
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What does she do because of that?
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What consequence follows?
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You don't need to know every turn before you write, but these questions can help you find the next plot event that grows out of the story you're already telling.
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So let's recap.
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Here are three things to take with you.
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One, your story has an external line and an internal line, the horizontal plot line and the vertical line running through those events.
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The events and what those events mean to your character work together like brick and mortar.
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Two, ask what hangs in the balance.
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What could she gain or lose and why does that matter to her?
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Follow her response.
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How she interprets an event shapes her choices, and those choices help create what happens next.
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Your character's inner story gives you a way to decide which events belong and to understand why a scene with plenty happening might still feel empty.
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And if you're struggling to see how the pieces of your draft fit together, I'm hosting a free live masterclass on Tuesday, October 13th, 7 p.m.
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Eastern.
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I'll help you see the structure already taking shape in what you've written, the frame your story hangs on, so you can return to your pages with a clearer sense of where you're going.
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Now I only have 50 spots open, so go to mylivemasterclass.com to hold your spot.
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So when you're looking at your draft, don't just ask, does enough happen?
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Ask why does what happens matter to this person?
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What does it ask her to face?
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What does she do in response?
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And what happens because of that choice?
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We keep reading because we want to know what happens next, but we also want to know why it all matters to your character, what it will mean for her.
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That's how your plot begins to hold together.
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If I asked you to tell me what happens in your story, you could probably do it.
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You know the opening, you know how it starts, you know the big plot turns, you may know how it ends, you might even have it outlined chapter by chapter.
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Now, let me ask you a different question.
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Who is your character at the end of your story that she wasn't at the beginning?
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What can she see, face, or do that she couldn't before?
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If that's harder to answer, it may be because you've spent more time figuring out what happens to your character than what it changes for her.
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And that's often where a story that is plenty happening still doesn't feel like it holds together.
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In last week's episode, we talked about how one clear event gives your first chapter its shape.
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So today I want to zoom out to the whole story and to the person at the center of it.
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Think of your story as two lines.
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There's the plot line, the external events, everything that happens.
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That's the horizontal line.
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Then there's the vertical line running through all those plot events.
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That's your character's inner story, how she understands what's happening, how she responds to it, what she believes about herself and other people, and what she isn't ready to face yet.
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It's the emotional structure.
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Those two lines are bound together like brick and mortar.
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The external events are the bricks.
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Your character's inner story is the mortar that holds them together.
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Without the mortar, you've got a pile of bricks.
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Without the bricks, the mortar has nothing to hold.
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But here's the part I want to focus on today.
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Your plot serves your character, not the other way around.
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And many writers focus more on what happens than who it happens to.
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They create all these dramatic events in the plot, and the characters are just reacting, and they're often reacting in predictable ways.
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No surprises there.
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Now, that doesn't mean you have to figure out your character's entire character arc before you start writing.
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You might discover it through the scenes you write.
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You might get halfway through a draft before you begin to understand what this story is asking your character to face.
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But whether you're drafting or revising, the question is the same.
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What do these plot events mean for the person living through them?
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And how do her responses, her choices, shape what happens next?
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How do her choices affect other characters?
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How do their responses change the trajectory of the plot?
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Okay, so let's get into it.
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Here's a question I want you to think about as you write.
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What hangs in the balance for your character?
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There may be something very concrete she could gain or lose: a job, a marriage, her home, her safety, or something less tangible, like her identity.
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But what does that mean to her?
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Losing the job might mean losing the one place where she feels competent.
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A marriage ending might force her to question a version of herself she's held on to for years.
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Falling in love could mean getting hurt again.
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That's where an event begins to matter beyond the fact that it happened.
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Two characters could experience the same event and respond in completely different ways, because different things hang in the balance for each of them.
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One character hears criticism from her mother and thinks, I need to try harder.
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Another thinks, I knew I couldn't trust you.
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And those interpretations lead to different choices.
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So when you're deciding what happens next, don't stop at whether the plot event is interesting.
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Ask what it puts at risk for this particular character.
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What does it challenge?
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What does it make harder for her to avoid?
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When you know that, even a quiet scene can carry enormous tension.
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Change is movement, not a mood.
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A character's inner story isn't just a record of how she feels.
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She can be lonely in chapter one, lonelier in chapter 10, and devastated in chapter 20.
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You've intensified the feeling, but has her understanding changed?
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Has she made a choice that creates a new problem?
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Has she tried something she wouldn't have tried before?
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Has she risked something?
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That's the movement we're looking for.
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If your character starts out lonely and wants to do something to solve that problem, what decision does she make despite being scared?
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What risks does she take?
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And what complications come out of those risks to challenge her?
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She might still be alone at the end of the story, but perhaps she's not lonely anymore.
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What being alone means to her has changed.
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And change doesn't have to mean becoming happier or wiser.
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A character can become more guarded.
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She can recognize something and refuse to act on it.
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She can make a choice that costs her more than she expected.
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What matters is the experiences of the story have consequences inside her, and those consequences affect what she does.
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For example, in Gail Honeyman's Eleanor Oliphant is completely fine.
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When we meet Eleanor, her life runs on routine.
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Work, the same meals, vodka on the weekends, Wednesday phone calls with her mother.
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She keeps other people at a distance, and she will tell you she's completely fine.
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But as readers, we begin to see the loneliness she herself doesn't acknowledge.
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So we have the circumstances of her life, and we have the way she understands those circumstances.
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Those aren't quite the same thing.
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Then Eleanor decides she's fallen in love with a musician she's never met.
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She builds a fantasy around him and begins preparing for their future together.
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New clothes, new hair, a plan for becoming the woman she thinks he'll want.
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There's movement there.
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She wants connection.
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But look at the form that connection takes.
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She's imagining a relationship with someone she doesn't know.
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She can give him all the qualities she needs him to have without the uncertainty of getting close to a real person.
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Meanwhile, she and Raymond, a colleague from work, come across an older man who has collapsed on the street.
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They help him, and helping Sammy brings Eleanor into contact with his family, their warmth, their invitations.
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Now she's encountering something she can't control through fantasy.
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Real people who include her, who notice her, who might come to matter to her.
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And that creates its own discomfort.
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Wanting connection doesn't mean she knows how to accept it.
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Then her fantasy about the musician collapses.
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When she sees him perform, the man in front of her doesn't match the man she's invented.
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That disappointment is devastating because of what she's invested in it.
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This was supposed to be her way into a different life.
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And when Eleanor reaches her lowest point, Raymond shows up.
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She begins accepting help.
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She starts counseling.
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Slowly, she begins facing the past and questioning things she's treated as true.
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By the end, her life isn't neatly resolved, but her relationship to other people and to her own experience has changed.
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She's beginning to let herself be known.
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Now here's how the plot serves Eleanor.
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Look at how these events work.
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The musician gives Eleanor somewhere to place her longing without having to navigate an actual relationship.
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Helping Sammy brings her into contact with people she can't simply invent.
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The collapse of her fantasy exposes how much she's been depending on it.
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And Raymond's presence gives her an opportunity to accept the kind of help she spent so much of her life resisting.
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Each plot event puts pressure on something inside her.
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But Eleanor also shapes the plot.
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She pursues the musician, she participates in helping Sammy, she responds to invitations, she accepts help.
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What happens affects her.
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What she does in response affects what happens next.
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That's how the two lines move together.
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If we knew nothing about Eleanor's loneliness or the hopes she's placed in the musician, his disappointing performance wouldn't be that impactful.
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It would just be another thing happening.
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It matters because we understand what it means to her.
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Choices are where change becomes visible.
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This is how readers experience a character's change.
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We can learn a great deal through her thoughts, through what she remembers, notices, judges, or realizes.
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But we also need to see what she does with that understanding.
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Does she answer the phone this time, tell someone the truth, stay when she would usually leave, ask for help, then wish she hadn't?
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Those choices don't have to be dramatic to be significant.
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And they won't necessarily move in one direction.
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Your character can take a risk, feel exposed, and retreat.
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She can recognize an old pattern and repeat it anyway.
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That doesn't erase the movement, it gives you something to work with.
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Now she knows something she didn't know before.
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What will it take for her to act on it?
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Sometimes your character doesn't change.
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The frustrating truth is that sometimes people can't change, sometimes they won't, sometimes they refuse to change.
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For example, Frank Wheeler in Revolutionary Road is scared to change.
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He holds on to the life he's claimed he wants to escape, and the outcome is tragic.
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His refusal has consequences, and by the end, we understand something about him that we couldn't see at the beginning.
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So when you sit down to write and you're not sure what comes next, return to your character.
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In last week's episode, I asked you to think about what your character wants when we first meet her.
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Now follow that want through the whole story.
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What does she want right now?
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What is she trying to protect?
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What isn't she ready to face?
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Then consider an event that puts pressure on one of those things.
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It might force her to choose between what she wants and what feels safe.
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It might give her exactly what she's been pursuing, only to reveal that it doesn't solve the problem she thought it would.
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Or it might offer her something she needs but isn't ready to accept.
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And once that plot event happens, stay with her response.
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What does she think it means?
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What fear or resistance does it kick up?
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What does she do because of that?
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What consequence follows?
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You don't need to know every turn before you write, but these questions can help you find the next plot event that grows out of the story you're already telling.
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So let's recap.
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Here are three things to take with you.
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One, your story has an external line and an internal line, the horizontal plot line and the vertical line running through those events.
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The events and what those events mean to your character work together like brick and mortar.
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Two, ask what hangs in the balance.
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What could she gain or lose and why does that matter to her?
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3.
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Follow her response.
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How she interprets an event shapes her choices, and those choices help create what happens next.
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Your character's inner story gives you a way to decide which events belong and to understand why a scene with plenty happening might still feel empty.
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And if you're struggling to see how the pieces of your draft fit together, I'm hosting a free live masterclass on Tuesday, October 13th, 7 p.m.
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Eastern.
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I'll help you see the structure already taking shape in what you've written, the frame your story hangs on, so you can return to your pages with a clearer sense of where you're going.
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Now I only have 50 spots open, so go to mylivemasterclass.com to hold your spot.
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Mylivemasterclass.com.
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So when you're looking at your draft, don't just ask, does enough happen?
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Ask why does what happens matter to this person?
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What does it ask her to face?
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What does she do in response?
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And what happens because of that choice?
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We keep reading because we want to know what happens next, but we also want to know why it all matters to your character, what it will mean for her.
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That's how your plot begins to hold together.
